a. These two puppies are bother and sister. They are six months old. One is a girl and the other is a boy. They love to play outside with their ball. They also love to go on walks around the park. Their favorite food is cheese. We like to chase the cat that lives next door. And we also love to play with children just like you!
h. These things are dogs. They live at home with people. They are a "mans bestfriend". They need to eat just like humans do. They go to the bathroom outside, well they are supposed to. They love to play. Eachone has their own personality just like we do. If you love them, they will love you too!
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I enjoyed reading this post becuase it was fun! It is perfect for the audience you chose becuase it uses short, descriptive sentences to help explain the dogs. I liked how you described the dogs as if the kids had never seen or heard about one before. One thing that I was kinda confused about was when you started off saying that they were boy and girl puppies, but then later you introduced them as dogs as if we didnt know what they were. Overall I thought the piece was well written for the audience. Well done, and the last sentence was way cute too!
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